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Your paragraph definitely made me laugh, Sir!
The fan really made me burst into laughter! I definitely searched Google!
On the other hand, I could not imagine life without electricity~
Water and electricity are equally important, and without them, oh my, I just want to close my eyes TT
I think one of the most useful inventions throughout our history should be electricity.
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There is no single man who can be truly credited for the discovery of electricity, but Benjamin Franklin and his kite experiment
could popped up in the list.
>> There is no single man who can be truly credited for the discovery of electricity, but Benjamin Franklin and his kite experiment
could pop up in the list.
Without applying and utilizing electricity, today\'s high tech devices are not imaginable.
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I\'ve experienced the world without electricity before.
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When I was a child, our country had been completely ruined right after the Korean War.
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We used to lighten our home using kerosene lamps because there was no electricity and candles were expensive.
>>We used to light our home using kerosene lamps because there was no electricity and candles were expensive.
Meanwhile, the most useless invention is a Noodle Fan which I found in the Internet.
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It\'s one of the most funny inventions, but it must be useless.
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After you attach this fan to your chopsticks and may use this device when cooling off your hot noodles.
>> After you attach this fan to your chopsticks, you may use this device when cooling off your hot noodles.
I think it is useless one because I\'d rather eat the hot noodles just right next to an electric fan so that I can enjoy them even in summer.
>>CORRECT! (If you could only see my reaction^^)
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