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2017-04-18 · 첨삭 강사 Paula

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HOMEWORK FOR TODAY: *CREATIVE WRITING: Some people prefer to work for a large company. Others prefer to work for a small company. Which would you prefer? Use specific reasons and details to support your choice. REMEMBER: There are no rules. You can write a poem, a short story or an essay. Aim for a hundred words or aim for a hundred thousand. Just start writing, and have fun. -- I'm prefer to work for a large company. It's because, large company has little danger of bankruptcy than small company and give high salary. Moreover, I think large company's welfare scheme is better than small company. So I want to work for a large company.

강사 첨삭

Dear [이름],


A terrific Tuesday to you! ^.^


First of all, I would like to thank you for making your homework! ^^

Thanks a lot! ^^,


You are good.

You can make interesting compositions like this one.

Good job! ^^.


That\'s all for now! ^^

Happy reading! ^^,

See you soon! ^^.


... Teacher Paula ... ^.~



HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:
*CREATIVE WRITING: Some people prefer to work for a large company. Others prefer to work for a small company. Which would you prefer? Use specific reasons and details to support your choice.
REMEMBER: There are no rules. You can write a poem, a short story or an essay. Aim for a hundred words or aim for a hundred thousand. Just start writing, and have fun.

--

I\'m prefer to work for a large company.

>> I prefer to work for a large company.

It\'s because, large company has little danger of bankruptcy than small company and give high salary.

>> It\'s because a large company has little danger of bankruptcy than a small company, and it gives high salary.

Moreover, I think large company\'s welfare scheme is better than small company.

>> Moreover, I think a large company\'s welfare scheme is better than a small company.

So I want to work for a large company.

>> Therefore, I want to work for a large company.

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