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2017-04-19 · 첨삭 강사 Sophia

학생이 쓴 원문

1. had finishied 2. had started 3. had seen 4. was repairing 5. had worked 6. had been playing 7. had eaten 8. had never flied 9. had forgotten 10. had revised Teacher! from here, I will write anything to think of in my mind because someone forgot my homework. lol. Anyway today, I will introduce you Korean eating culture. What is different between Korea and Western countries in eating culture is that there are a major food, boiled rice, and side foods, called "banchan". While one kind of food constitutes one meal in other countries, however one meal consists of various kind of foods, boiled rice and diverse "banchan". As a result the Korean can gain various nutrients from only one meal. Another property is that the Korean prefer hot and spicy food, so there are alway soup which is hot on their table. Also, the Korean like spicy food which chili pepper input. Therefore Korean gets a stomach cancer more than other country' people because of their preference to hot and spicy food.

강사 첨삭

HELLO [이름],

Thank you for doing your homework.

Have a nice day!

Teacher Sophia

Here are your answers:

1. had finishied

>> CORRECT
2. had started

>> CORRECT
3. had seen

>> CORRECT
4. was repairing

>> The mechanic had repaired her car when Mary arrived at the garage.
5. had worked

>> Caroline was tired when she left the office because she had been working all day.
6. had been playing

>> CORRECT
7. had eaten

>> CORRECT
8. had never flied

>> It was my first flight. I had never flown before 9. had forgotten

>> CORRECT
10. had revised

>> On the day of his exam, Joe was ready. He had been revising for weeks.

Here are your corrections:

Teacher! from here, I will write anything to think of in my mind because someone forgot my homework. lol.

>> Teacher, I will write something that it\'s in my mind because someone forgot to give me an essay homework.
Anyway today, I will introduce you Korean eating culture.

>> Anyway, I would like to introduce the eating culture in Korea today.
What is different between Korea and Western countries in eating culture is that there are a major food, boiled rice, and side foods, called \"banchan\".

>> What\'s the difference between the eating culture of Korea and the Western countries? It\'s \"banchan\"; boiled rice with side dishes.

While one kind of food constitutes one meal in other countries, however one meal consists of various kind of foods, boiled rice and diverse \"banchan\".

>> Banchan is composed of different kinds of food.

As a result the Korean can gain various nutrients from only one meal.

>> Koreans can get various nutrients from only one meal.
Another property is that the Korean prefer hot and spicy food, so there are alway soup which is hot on their table.

>> Koreans also prefer hot and spicy food like hot and spicy soup on the table.

Also, the Korean like spicy food which chili pepper input.

>> Koreans like spicy food with too much chili pepper.

Therefore Korean gets a stomach cancer more than other country\' people because of their preference to hot and spicy food.

>> As a result, Koreans suffer from stomach cancer than other countries because of their food preference on spicy food.

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