Homework

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A wonderful Wednesday to you! ^.^

Thanks a lot for doing your homework! ^.^

Your answer is really interesting.

You explained your point very well.

However, I wanted to read more.

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... Teacher Paula ... ^.~

HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:
*CREATIVE WRITING: People work because they need money to live. What are some other reasons that people work? Discuss one or more of these reasons. Use specific examples and details to support your answer.
REMEMBER: There are no rules. You can write a poem, a short story or an essay. Aim for a hundred words or aim for a hundred thousand. Just start writing, and have fun.

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I think the reasons that people work is it\'s worthwile for them.

>> I think the reasons that people work are worthwhile for them.

Because of their work, they can achieve their dream, earn money, and meet many types of people.

>> Because of their work, they can achieve their dreams, earn money and meet many different types of people.

They can feel happy and worthy in their working life.

>> CORRECT!

So I think people work to feel effective life.

>> Therefore, I think people work to feel that they have effective lives.