Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Dear [이름],
A funny Friday to us! ^.^
Thank you for sharing your ideas! ^^
I totally agree with you.
Good job! ^^,
That\'s all for now! ^^
See you! ^^,
... Teacher Paula ... ^.~
HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:
*CREATIVE WRITING: Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Face-to-face communication is better than other types of communication, such as letters, e-mail, or telephone calls. Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.
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I prefer to talk face-to-face, but sometimes I feel letters and text-messages communications are better than face-to-ae communication.
>> I prefer to talk to someone face-to-face, but sometimes, I feel letters and text message communications are better then face-to-face communication.
When we have a story which is hard to say at realtime, like saying I love you to our parents, say I\'m so sorry to friend etc.
we can easily deliever our think to receiver.
>> When we have a story which is hard to say at the time of speaking, like saying I love you to our parents, say I\'m so sorry to a friend, etc., we can easily deliver what we think the any receivers.
With a letter, we can arrange our think while writing it.
>> With a letter, we can arrange our thinking while writing it.
And, we can more becareful in words than face-to-face communication.
>> In addition, we can be more careful in words than face-to-face communication.
Moreover, we can review and remind this situation as a memory in the future.
>> CORRECT!
So I think Other types of communication is better than face-to-face type.
>> Therefore, I think other types of communication is better than face-to-face.
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