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2017-04-21 · 첨삭 강사 Paula

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HOMEWORK FOR TODAY: *CREATIVE WRITING: Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Face-to-face communication is better than other types of communication, such as letters, e-mail, or telephone calls. Use specific reasons and details to support your answer. -- I prefer to talk face-to-face, but sometimes I feel letters and text-messages communications are better than face-to-ae communication. When we have a story which is hard to say at realtime, like saying I love you to our parents, say I'm so sorry to friend etc. we can easily deliever our think to receiver. With a letter, we can arrange our think while writing it. And, we can more becareful in words than face-to-face communication. Moreover, we can review and remind this situation as a memory in the future. So I think Other types of communication is better than face-to-face type.

강사 첨삭

Dear [이름],


A funny Friday to us! ^.^


Thank you for sharing your ideas! ^^

I totally agree with you.

Good job! ^^,


That\'s all for now! ^^

See you! ^^,


... Teacher Paula ... ^.~



HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:
*CREATIVE WRITING: Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Face-to-face communication is better than other types of communication, such as letters, e-mail, or telephone calls. Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.

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I prefer to talk face-to-face, but sometimes I feel letters and text-messages communications are better than face-to-ae communication.

>> I prefer to talk to someone face-to-face, but sometimes, I feel letters and text message communications are better then face-to-face communication.


When we have a story which is hard to say at realtime, like saying I love you to our parents, say I\'m so sorry to friend etc.

we can easily deliever our think to receiver.

>> When we have a story which is hard to say at the time of speaking, like saying I love you to our parents, say I\'m so sorry to a friend, etc., we can easily deliver what we think the any receivers.

With a letter, we can arrange our think while writing it.

>> With a letter, we can arrange our thinking while writing it.

And, we can more becareful in words than face-to-face communication.

>> In addition, we can be more careful in words than face-to-face communication.

Moreover, we can review and remind this situation as a memory in the future.

>> CORRECT!

So I think Other types of communication is better than face-to-face type.

>> Therefore, I think other types of communication is better than face-to-face.

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