Homework
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Dear [이름],
A funny Friday to you once again! ^.^
Thank you once again for doing your homework passionately! ^^
By the way, don\'t worry about not doing your homework on time.
I know that having late homework are not really what you want.
I understand you.
Anyway, happy reading! ^^
See you soon! ^^,
... Teacher Paula ... ^.~
HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:
*CREATIVE WRITING: Some people like to do only what they already do well. Other people prefer to try new things and take risks. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your choice.
REMEMBER: There are no rules. You can write a poem, a short story or an essay. Aim for a hundred words or aim for a hundred thousand. Just start writing, and have fun.
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I prefer to do I already do well in part of the work.
>> I prefer to do the things I do well in part of the work.
It\'s because I don\'t want to bear any risk in my work.
>> It\'s because I don\'t want to bear any risks at my work.
But, outside of that, I like to try new things such as cook, visit other countries, and try new activities.
>> On the other hand, outside of that, I like to try new things such as cooking, visiting other countries and trying new activities.
I can\'t choose only one.
>> CORRECT!
haha. XD
>> Haha. XD
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ps. Sorry for the late homework for yesterday.
>> P.S.: Sorry for the late submission of my homework.
I was so busy..
>> I was so busy.
Midterm is over at May 1st, and I will do my best on my test and our class during this period of course.
>> Midterm will be over on May 1st, and I will do my best on my test and our class during this period of course.
I will do my best more after this period.
>> CORRECT!
Thank you for understanding my situation.
>> CORRECT!
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