homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
How do you feel now [이름]?
I hope you are feeling much better. Take good care of yourself.
See you tomorrow.
~Teacher Shanee^^,
I think the first wish I would make is to let me see the world.
>>> Correct!
I always wondered what\'s beyond our country.
>>> Correct!
I think it will help me understand the world and different culture.
>>> I think it will help me understand the world and different cultures.
I might even help me see how human relationships work and why there\'re so complicated.
>>> It might even help me see how human relationships work and why the\\y\'re so complicated.
The second wish I would make is to find out secrets of the space.
>>> The second wish I would make is to find out the secrets of the space.
I was always interested in space and back holes.
>>> I was always interested in space and black holes.
Studying about them would be like solving secrets of the nature.
>>> Correct!
It\'s sort of like a puzzle nature gave us.
>>> Correct!
The last wish I would make is to make one or two best friends.
>>> Correct!
You don\'t need a lot of friends.
>>> Correct!
At least that\'s what I think.
>>> Correct!
I think one person who understands me completely and know what I\'m thinkin without saying it aloud is way better than ten people who might think they know me but actually don\'t.
>>> I think one person who understands me completely and knows what I\'m thinking without saying it aloud is a way better than ten people who might think they know me but actually don\'t.
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