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학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]! ^^
It was so nice meeting you too. :)
I know how frustrating it is to learn a new language, specially
that English and your language has a lot of differences in terms
of sentence structure and other aspects. It can also get so tiring
because there\'s a lot of things to learn about the new language.
There are thousands of websites that gives tips on how to improve
our English skills but it can also get confusing.
What I only want to say is stay focus. You have to do it step by step.
Patience is really needed in learning English. Be patient with yourself and
don\'t easily give up on yourself.
I will be here to help you, so I hope that we can identify your weaknesses and strengths
so that from there we can move on to the next aspects of learning that you need.
Have a great weekend!
See you on Monday! ^^
Teacher Glenda
Here are my corrections:
Hello Glenda !! it was nice to meet you how are you ?
>> Correct
It`s been pleasure talking with you haha
>> It\'s been a pleasure talking with you.
i was reading well that you wrote me some advice
>> I was reading the advices you for me.
so all i want is to practice writing for homework like assay
>> So I want is to practice my writing in having essay homework.
and i want to speak english more with you!
>> Correct
english is necessary to live in the world and in my job as well
>> English is necessary to love in this world and in my job.
i study english everyday but i haven`t progressed as much as i hoped
>> I studied English everyday but I haven\'t progressed as what I hoped for.
i know it`s difficult to express i thought but i tried
>> I know it\'s difficult to express my thoughts but I tried.
Actually i still don`t know my strengths of english
>> Actually, I still don\'t know what are my strengths in English.
and what does that mean to think of english ?
>> And what does it mean by thinking in English?
when i study english ,i get stressed about mother-tongue interrubtion
>> When I study English, I get stressed out because I get interrupted by my native tongue.
thank you for reading i\'ll see you on monday hahaha
>> Correct
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