HOMEWORK
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Many years ago, I got extremely depressed because of a certain situation which took place at my university.
It was devastating I did not want to go to school anymore TT
On the other hand, my aunt told me that the stress I was feeling was nothing compared to the real pressure at a workplace.
More than a decade later, I realized it\'s true.
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The military always emphasizes on the importance of team spirit, saying \"Discord is much more dangerous than enemy.\"
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It is because the discord of two Russian generals had caused their troops to be destroyed by German forces in the First World War.
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The reasons why new college graduates have a hard time interacting with colleagues in working as a team could be focused on the lack of understanding and experiencing the relation of competition and team spirit.
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College life may offer some opportunities of coworking in class, but they would not be that much practical due to the difference of environmental situations between a school and workplace.
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In fact, if one is in training, the other is at war.
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In a workplace, fierce competitions naturally exist between individuals and teams.
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They are very positive in respect of activating the organization.
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In order to cope with this problem, internships and training of new employees are very effective.
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Competition and collaboration at work are just like two wheels on a wagon.
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