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2017-04-25 · 첨삭 강사 Rose

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In my own experience, I believe that it is wise to be suspicious of the motives or honesty of other people, even those who appear to be trustworthy. The first case study is about the common weakness of those who are easily cheated. The more desperately someone needs money or help, the more easily he or she is exposed to fraud. The second case study is about several people's cheating. If a person's malice can be perceived, but a collective cheating could not be discerned. It is just the same as 'Hidden Cameras', a comic TV program which shows that several staff members deliberately cheat and make fun of a person following the scenario. The third case study is about an unintentional cheating. Some business was really promising, but the situation abruptly changed and all investors ended up losing a lot of money. Anyway, it is hard to fathom the real minds and intentions of men.

강사 첨삭

I think one of the most difficult things to decipher is the human mind.

In my opinion, it is composed of millions of thoughts running simultaneously.

Furthermore, some people seem to have a mask which conceals their real identity.

There were times when I thought I shouldn\'t have trusted a certain person.

It turned out he was a snake hiding in a human body *_*

In my own experience, I believe that it is wise to be suspicious of the motives or honesty of other people, even those who appear to be trustworthy.

>>CORRECT!
 The first case study is about the common weakness of those who are easily cheated.

>>CORRECT!
 The more desperately someone needs money or help, the more easily he or she is exposed to fraud.

>>CORRECT!
 The second case study is about several people\'s cheating.

>>CORRECT!
 If a person\'s malice can be perceived, but a collective cheating could not be discerned.

>> If a person\'s malice can be perceived, a collective cheating could not be discerned.

>> A person\'s malice can be perceived, but a collective cheating could not be discerned.
 It is just the same as \'Hidden Cameras\', a comic TV program which shows that several staff members deliberately cheat and make fun of a person following the scenario.

>>CORRECT!
 The third case study is about an unintentional cheating.

>>CORRECT!
 Some business was really promising, but the situation abruptly changed and all investors ended up losing a lot of money. 

>>CORRECT!
 Anyway, it is hard to fathom the real minds and intentions of men.

>>CORRECT!

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