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2017-04-25 · 첨삭 강사 Klein

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Are you a scalper? If sentences can be bought and sold, what would you do? ==> I am not a scalper. So I don't have ability to buy something cheaply and I also have not ability sell it higher price than I bought. If I have to buy English sentences and I have to sell it higher price, I think it is impossible to me. Anyway if I have to buy English sentences, I will buy English sentences about LOVE. There are a lot of beautiful sentences about LOVE and many people want to use that kind of words to their lover. So I will sell the LOVE sentences to the people who want their lover to say romantically. They want to the beautiful sentences, and I can provide those sentences, maybe I can sell those English sentences higher price than I bought.

강사 첨삭

Good one! I like the way you think, James. Oh, that is an understatement. I really love the way you think! You seem to have the makings of a businessman. What do you think? Now, I wonder what those English love sentences are. Perhaps, you can give me some examples. I am dying to hear you out. I\'ll catch up with you then later. Thanks a bunch! -Klein- Are you a scalper?If sentences can be bought and sold, what would you do?==> I am not a scalper. >>CorrectSo I don\'t have ability to buy something cheaply and I also have not ability sell it higher price than I bought.>>So, I don\'t have the ability to buy something cheaply and sell it at a higher price. >>So, I neither have the ability to buy something cheaply and sell it at a higher price.  If I have to buy English sentences and I have to sell it higher price, I think it is impossible to me.>>If I have to buy English sentences and sell them at a higher price, I think it is impossible for me. Anyway if I have to buy English sentences, I will buy English sentences about LOVE.>>Correct There are a lot of beautiful sentences about LOVE and many people want to use that kind of words to their lover.>>There are a lot of beautiful sentences about love and many people want to use those kinds of words for their lover. So I will sell the LOVE sentences to the people who want their lover to say romantically.>>So, I will sell the love sentences to the people who want their lover to speak romantically. They want to the beautiful sentences, and I can provide those sentences, maybe I can sell those English sentences higher price than I bought. >>They want beautiful sentences and if I can provide those sentences, maybe I can sell them at a higher price.

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