Homework

Good day to you [이름]! ^^

Thank you very much for answering the question that I have given to you!

I hope that you not only understood the question but also reflected about it.

I\'m really glad that even though you have a busy schedule, you still managed to have a free time answering this.

Have a wonderful day to you! ^^

~ Teacher Paula

1. I think both of their opinions are right.

>> CORRECT!

2. It\'s because, work hard with careful planning would cause to face some chances.

>> It\'s because, working hard with careful planning would have greater chances.

3. And while to that, we would take some risks.

>> CORRECT!

4. All of these process are important to success.

>> All of these processes are important for success.

5. So I think if we work hard, we can get a wonderful chance to success.

>> So I think if we will work hard, we can get a wonderful chance to succeed.