Homework
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강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]! ^^
Oh I\'m so sorry about the homework.
I must have overlooked it. :) But I thank you for this sharing. :)
Reminders when it comes to sentence construction:
>> The first letter in your sentence is always big letter.
>> Proper nouns always start with big letter as well.
This is very effective for you to share your thoughts and ideas.
I will keep in mind to give you essay homework. :D
Thank you [이름]!
See yah! ^^
Teacher Glenda
Here are my corrections:
Hello Glenda ~~ how are you??
thank you for teaching today haha
the homework which you offered me is alredy (already) done last monday (Monday)
>> The homework you gave me was already done last Monday.
and i (I) want is to practice (practice) my writing in having essay homework
>> I want to practice my writing in having essay homework.
so can you check that i (I) had during the day ?? :)
>> So can you check what I had today?
today is the day i go to school so i got up at 7:00PM
>> I have to go to school today so I got up at 7 o\'clock.
and i took a shower then put on my clothes
>> I took a shower and put on my clothes.
after finishing all preparation as i left my home
>> After preparing, I left home.
i forgot to bring my transportation card so back to my room
>> I forgot to bring my transportation card so I had to go back to my room.
i tried to find it but i didn`t find anywhere
>> I tried to look for it but I couldn\'t.
after all i took a bus by a cash
>> So I took the bus using cash.
when i arrived at school , i went to office
>> When I arrived at school, I went to the office.
i heard about orientation too many people gathered together and
listened about homestay , precaution and course of study.
>> It was an orientation and there were a lot of people. We listed about homestay, precaution and course of study.
and then i went back to home~ !
>> Then, I finally went home.
i\'ll see you on wednesday
>> I\'ll see you on Wednesday.
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