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2017-04-25 · 첨삭 강사 Glenda

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Hello Glenda ~~ how are you?? thank you for teaching today haha the homework which you offered me is alredy done last monday and i want is to pratice my writing in having essay homework so can you check that i had during the day ?? :) today is the day i go to school so i got up at 7:00PM and i took a shower then put on my clothes after finishing all preparation as i left my home i forgot to bring my transportation card so back to my room i tried to find it but i didn`t find anywhere after all i took a bus by a cash when i arrived at school , i went to office i heard about orientation too many people gathered together and listened about homestay , precaution and course of study. and then i went back to home~ ! i'll see you on wednesday

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Hello [이름]! ^^


Oh I\'m so sorry about the homework.

I must have overlooked it. :) But I thank you for this sharing. :)

Reminders when it comes to sentence construction: 

>> The first letter in your sentence is always big letter. 

>> Proper nouns always start with big letter as well.  


This is very effective for you to share your thoughts and ideas.

I will keep in mind to give you essay homework. :D


Thank you [이름]!

See yah! ^^


Teacher Glenda




Here are my corrections:

Hello Glenda ~~ how are you??

thank you for teaching today haha  

the homework which you offered me is alredy (already) done last monday (Monday)

>> The homework you gave me was already done last Monday.
 and i (I) want is to practice (practice) my writing in having essay homework 

>> I want to practice my writing in having essay homework.
 so can you check that i (I) had during the day ?? :)

>> So can you check what I had today?


 today is the day i go to school so i got up at 7:00PM 

>> I have to go to school today so I got up at 7 o\'clock.
 and i took a shower then put on my clothes 

>> I took a shower and put on my clothes.
after finishing all preparation as i left my home 

>> After preparing, I left home. 
i forgot to bring my transportation card so back to my room 

>> I forgot to bring my transportation card so I had to go back to my room.
 i tried to find it but i didn`t find anywhere 

>> I tried to look for it but I couldn\'t.
after all i took a bus by a cash 

>> So I took the bus using cash.
 when i arrived at school , i went to office 

>> When I arrived at school, I went to the office.
 i heard about orientation too many people gathered together and 
 listened about homestay , precaution and course of study.

>> It was an orientation and there were a lot of people. We listed about homestay, precaution and course of study.
 and then i went back to home~ !

>> Then, I finally went home.
 i\'ll see you on wednesday

>> I\'ll see you on Wednesday.

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