Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi, William! ^_^
Thank you very much for writing in our composition board today.
I truly appreciate it.
I understand why you are not able to do your homework in our classes.
You are a very busy person and preparing for your future and the future of your family is very important. :)
I also agree that a little knowledge is a very dangerous thing.
In my country, they say that \"empty cans are noisy\".
This expression is a subtle way of saying that people who don\'t know anything are often talkative or noisy.
Anyhow, I hope you are doing great.
I enjoyed reading your essay. :)
See you again tomorrow.
~Teacher Charry ^_^
Hi Tracher Charry!
>> Hi, Tracher Charry!
I never did my duty that is my homework.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> I never did my duty to do my homework.
I should have doing my homework.
>> I should have done my homework.
But I was busy preparing for an exam.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> However, I was busy preparing for an exam.
Do you know that I have studied for my future for many months to get promoted as a warrant officer that everyone wants to be.
>> Do you know that I have studied for my future for many months to get promoted as a warrant officer, that everyone wants to be?
I agree that \"a little knowledge is a dangerous things\".
>> I agree that \"a little knowledge is a dangerous thing\".
It is valled \"catalog knowledge\" by Korean.
>> It is called \"catalog knowledge\" by Koreans.
Someone who have a stperficial person does not know how to keep his mouth shut.
>> Someone who has a superficial personality does not know how to keep his mouth shut.
I really avoid them while serving as a Navy.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> I avoid them on purpose while serving as a Navy.
Thank you for reading my sentences and have a nice day.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> Thank you for taking the time to read my sentences and have a great day!
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