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2017-04-25 · 첨삭 강사 Charry

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Hi Tracher Charry! I never did my duty that is my homework. I should have doing my homework. But I was busy preparing for an exam. Do you know that I have studied for my future for many months to get promoted as a warrant officer that everyone wants to be. I agree that "a little knowledge is a dangerous things". It is valled "catalog knowledge" by Korean. Someone who have a stperficial person does not know how to keep his mouth shut. I really avoid them while serving as a Navy. Thank you for reading my sentences and have a nice day.

강사 첨삭

Hi, William! ^_^

Thank you very much for writing in our composition board today.

I truly appreciate it.

I understand why you are not able to do your homework in our classes.

You are a very busy person and preparing for your future and the future of  your family is very important. :)

I also agree that a little knowledge is a very dangerous thing.

In my country, they say that \"empty cans are noisy\".

This expression is a subtle way of saying that people who don\'t know anything are often talkative or noisy.

Anyhow, I hope you are doing great.

I enjoyed reading your essay. :)

See you again tomorrow.

~Teacher Charry ^_^

Hi Tracher Charry!

>> Hi, Tracher Charry!

I never did my duty that is my homework.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> I never did my duty to do my homework.

I should have doing my homework.

>> I should have done my homework.

But I was busy preparing for an exam.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> However, I was busy preparing for an exam.

Do you know that I have studied for my future for many months to get promoted as a warrant officer that everyone wants to be.

>> Do you know that I have studied for my future for many months to get promoted as a warrant officer, that everyone wants to be?

I agree that \"a little knowledge is a dangerous things\".

>> I agree that \"a little knowledge is a dangerous thing\".

It is valled \"catalog knowledge\" by Korean.

>> It is called \"catalog knowledge\" by Koreans.

Someone who have a stperficial person does not know how to keep his mouth shut.

>> Someone who has a superficial personality does not know how to keep his mouth shut.

I really avoid them while serving as a Navy.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> I avoid them on purpose while serving as a Navy.

Thank you for reading my sentences and have a nice day.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> Thank you for taking the time to read my sentences and have a great day!

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