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I absolutely agree that the mass media, including television, radio and newspapers, have great influence in shaping people's ideas.
I usually get useful information from the mass media, books and people who I meet and talk to.
Coming up with some ideas without any reference is not easy and common.
When I attended a morning prayer everyday in the army, pastors' sermons used to give great effect in shaping my ideas.
My brain's efficiency and concentration early in the morning are much higher than any other time zones.
In my experience, our ideas don't pop up at any time and without a certain amount of thoughts.
When I spend days agonizing over how to cope with my mission, a bright idea all of a sudden flashes into my mind, while I am listening to a sermon, watching a scene in TV, reading a sentence in a book, or talking to friends.
When ideas come into our mind, we have to take a note right away.
A lot of post-its are attached to the top of my bookshelf.
When I watch TV, I usually prepare to take a note.
A good idea is very hard to get, but very easy to forget.
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I could not agree with you more, Sir [이름]!
Acquiring beneficial ideas is as difficult as looking for a needle in a haystack :)
Wow! I admire your diligence in watching for useful expressions or information~
While a lot of people only relax when they watch TV, you take that opportunity to catch something important^^
See you on Friday, Sir! Thank you for your daily energy!
I absolutely agree that the mass media, including television, radio and newspapers, have great influence in shaping people\'s ideas.
>>CORRECT!
I usually get useful information from the mass media, books and people who I meet and talk to.
I usually get useful information from the mass media, books and people who I meet and talk to.
>>CORRECT!
Coming up with some ideas without any reference is not easy and common.
Coming up with some ideas without any reference is not easy and common.
>>CORRECT!
When I attended a morning prayer everyday in the army, pastors\' sermons used to give great effect in shaping my ideas.
When I attended a morning prayer everyday in the army, pastors\' sermons used to give great effect in shaping my ideas.
>>When I attended a morning prayer in the army everyday, pastors\' sermons used to give great effect in shaping my ideas.
My brain\'s efficiency and concentration early in the morning are much higher than any other time zones.
>>CORRECT!
In my experience, our ideas don\'t pop up at any time and without a certain amount of thoughts.
In my experience, our ideas don\'t pop up at any time and without a certain amount of thoughts.
>>CORRECT!
When I spend days agonizing over how to cope with my mission, a bright idea all of a sudden flashes into my mind, while I am listening to a sermon, watching a scene in TV, reading a sentence in a book, or talking to friends.
When I spend days agonizing over how to cope with my mission, a bright idea all of a sudden flashes into my mind, while I am listening to a sermon, watching a scene in TV, reading a sentence in a book, or talking to friends.
>>When I spend days agonizing over how to cope with my mission, a bright idea all of a sudden flashes into my mind, while I am listening to a sermon, watching a scene on TV, reading a sentence in a book, or talking to friends.
When ideas come into our mind, we have to take a note right away.
When ideas come into our mind, we have to take a note right away.
>>CORRECT!
A lot of post-its are attached to the top of my bookshelf.
A lot of post-its are attached to the top of my bookshelf.
>>A lot of post-its are attached on the top of my bookshelf.
When I watch TV, I usually prepare to take a note.
When I watch TV, I usually prepare to take a note.
>>CORRECT!
A good idea is very hard to get, but very easy to forget.
A good idea is very hard to get, but very easy to forget.
>>CORRECT!
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