Homework

Hi [이름]! ^^

A bright afternoon to you! ^^

Thank you for your effort ^^ I really appreciate it.

Your right, essay would really help you especially in terms of your

grammar, spelling and sentence construction.

Keep it up! ^^

See you in class!

Teacher Glenda

Here are my corrections:

Hi ~ Glenda how are you doing?
Thank you for giving the essay haha
I tried it as much as i could
>>I tried as much as I could. (Again, don\'t forget the period at the end of your sentence and I is always in capital letter)

It depends on how people think 

>> It depends on how people think. (Your sentence is correct however, don\'t forget your punctuation marks[.,!?] at the end of your sentence.)

In my opinion, Of course i agree for example most koreans learned a lot of english when they were a student. 

>> In my opinion, I would agree. For example, most Koreans learned a lot about English when they were students. (All proper nouns should start with a capital letter)

The consequence is that they can`t speak english in front of foreighs but they are good at reading ,wrirting and grammar.

>> The consequence is, they can\'t speak in English in front of foreigners buy they are good in reading, writing and in grammar.

i said i agree however there are always exceptions for instance soccer,basketball something like that when i was at school
i used to play some exercises 

>> Moreover, I agree but there are exceptions. For instance, when I was studying I used to play soccer and basketball.

 thanks to the exercise like that foreigner and i could easliy make friends haha

>> I\'m thankful for these games that I used to play with other foreigner students, I was able to easily make friends.