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2017-04-27 · 첨삭 강사 Mia

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HOMEWORK FOR TODAY: WRITING SKILL: ESSAY: If you could eat only 3 foods for the rest of your life, what would they be? Please answer in complete sentences. Oh, this topic is so sad. If I could eat only 3 foods for the rest of my life, I will choose chocolate, ramen, and bibimbab. First of all, I love chocolate so much. When I feel sad or tired, I usually eat it. It makes me happy. Bibimbab has many ingredients, like rice, vegetables, and small amount of meats. I think I can keep the nutrition of my body's balance. And sometimes I think I need to eat noodles. Ramen is easy to cook, and make people be addicted to eat it. I can't imagine my food life without ramen. So I chose these 3 foods. But If I need to eat only these 3 foods forever, I would cry. (T_T)

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]!!

Thank you for making your assignment!

Good job!

~~ Teacher Mia ~~

Oh, this topic is so sad. If I could eat only 3 foods for the rest of my life, I will choose chocolate, ramen, and bibimbab. First of all, I love chocolate so much. When I feel sad or tired, I usually eat it. It makes me happy. Bibimbab has many ingredients, like rice, vegetables, and small amount of meats. I think I can keep the nutrition of my body\'s balance. And sometimes I think I need to eat noodles. Ramen is easy to cook, and make people be addicted to eat it. I can\'t imagine my food life without ramen. So I chose these 3 foods. But If I need to eat only these 3 foods forever, I would cry. (T_T)

>> Oh, this topic is so sad. If I could eat only 3 foods for the rest of my life, I will choose chocolate, ramen, and bibimbab. First of all, I love chocolate so much. When I feel sad or tired, I usually eat it. It makes me happy. Bibimbab has many ingredients like rice, vegetables and small amount of meats. I think I can keep the balance of nutrition for my body. Sometimes I think I need to eat noodles. Ramen is easy to cook and makes people to get addicted to eat it. I can\'t imagine my life without ramen. So I chose these three foods. But If I need to eat only these 3 foods forever, I would cry. (T_T)

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