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 Hi [이름]!

A great evening! ^^

I would definitely agree with you on this.

I think, even if you don\'t have a family of your own. What you have

mentioned are really the key points to maintain a happy family. :)

I hope that you would be happy and you will enjoy your

holiday. :)

See you!

Teacher Glenda

 Here are my corrections:
 i acually don`t know how to maintain a happy family.

>> I actually don\'t know how to maintain a happy family.
 but I learned a lot what to do as watching our family 

>> But I learned a lot on what to do from our family.
 and i have a method that never fail.

>> And I have a method that never fails.
 well, it`s quite simple 

>> Well, it\'s quite simple.
First of all, make sure you should think your family first 

>> First of all, you have to make sure that you put your family first.
 Second of all, please remember ,family is more important than work 

>> Second, remember that family is more important than work.
 Third of all ,whatever you did , pretty wife and adorable children are behind you
>> Third, whatever you do, you have a beautiful wife and adorable children behind you.
If you can keep one of three what i wrote , you`ll achieve the happy family

>> If you keep one of the three things I wrote, you\'ll achieve a happy family.