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2017-05-01 · 첨삭 강사 Rose

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I can't completely agree that universities should not provide so much theoretical knowledge but give more practical training throughout their courses. In general, natural science is the study of the universe and how it works, while social science is the study of human behavior. Social science is much more theoretical than natural science, while natural science is more practical than social science. Both sciences are now being taught in practical training, but it is very difficult to apply the way of practical training to social science. When I was in the army, it was crucially emphasized, "Fight as trained, train in how to fight." Likewise, I think that universities should give more practical training to focus on students' future jobs. However, social science is about human beings, our happy life and the reason for being. Recently, that is why many manufacturing companies have been interested in the importance of humanities which don't have any direct relation with their products. Nevertheless, I strongly oppose learning for learning's sake.

강사 첨삭

I  know that the absence of theoretical knowledge is also dangerous since we need some foundation.

However, depending on books leaves a person jailed and incomplete.

There will be always be an incomplete spot only experience can fill.

See you!

I can\'t completely agree that universities should not provide so much theoretical knowledge but give more practical training throughout

their courses.

>>CORRECT!
 In general, natural science is the study of the universe and how it works, while social science is the study of human behavior.

>>CORRECT!
 Social science is much more theoretical than natural science, while natural science is more practical than social science.

>>CORRECT!
 Both sciences are now being taught in practical training, but it is very difficult to apply the way of practical training to social science.

>>CORRECT!
 When I was in the army, it was crucially emphasized, \"Fight as trained, train in how to fight.\"

>>CORRECT!
 Likewise, I think that universities should give more practical training to focus on students\' future jobs.

>>CORRECT!
 However, social science is about human beings, our happy life and the reason for being.

>>However, social science is about human beings, our happy life, and the reason for being.
 Recently, that is why many manufacturing companies have been interested in the importance of humanities which don\'t have any direct relation with their products.

>> Recently, that is why many manufacturing companies have been interested in the importance of humanities which doesn\'t have any direct relation with their products.
 Nevertheless, I strongly oppose learning for learning\'s sake. 

>>CORRECT!
 

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