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Who among the people around you think got most mettle?
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Among the people around me, I think Mr. [Name] got most mettle.
Mr. [Name] is my team member and I had experience to work with him.
If there is a difficult thing in his work, he can solve it very smartly.
And he has a passion and a pride at his work,so he enjoy his work.
He always give me a pleasure when we work together.
He works hard and works pleasantly.
And sometimes when we get a problem, he doesn't hesitate to solve that problem.
Anyway he gives me a good emotion when he works.
So I think Mr. [Name] gets most mettle.
강사 첨삭
Mr. [Name] sure is admirable!
Thank you for sharing, James.
I wonder when I can meet him. It must be nice working with him, as you have mentioned.
I think you also got enough mettle. Stay awesome, James!
Until our next chat.
-Klein-
Who among the people around you think got most mettle?==> Among the people around me, I think Mr. [Name] got most mettle.
>>CorrectMr. Park is my team member and I had experience to work with him.
>>Mr. [Name] is my team member and I had experienced working with him.If there is a difficult thing in his work, he can solve it very smartly.
>>CorrectAnd he has a passion and a pride at his work,so he enjoy his work.>>And he has passion and pride at his works, so he enjoys his work.He always give me a pleasure when we work together.
>>He always gives me pleasure when we work together.He works hard and works pleasantly.
>>Correct!And sometimes when we get a problem, he doesn\'t hesitate to solve that problem.>>CorrectAnyway he gives me a good emotion when he works.
>>CorrectSo I think Mr. [Name] gets most mettle.
>>Correct
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