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2017-05-08 · 첨삭 강사 Klein

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When do you usually run around in circles? ==> When I have a lot of works at the same time, I usually run around in circles. At that time, I was very busy but the result is poor. I think I intend to finish the work on time, so I make some mistakes at work. I just focus on finishing time, so I don't think deeply about the work. It is my defect so I try to change my action, but it is very difficult to fix it. So I try not to make a lot of works at the same time. If I have a time, I do some works in advance. It gives me a spare time to think when I have a work. After that, I could reduce my mistakes at work.

강사 첨삭

You rock! You also rule, James! Thank you for editing your homework. I am glad it\'s possible. How do you feel about writing this? Please keep in mind what you want to do. Let\'s hope it will materialize. Do what you can. Do not procrastinate. LOL Oh, I should also remind myself of this. Stay safe and sound! -Klein- When do you usually run around in circles?==> When I have a lot of works at the same time, I usually run around in circles.>>When I have a lot of work at the same time, I usually run around in circles. At that time, I was very busy but the result is poor.>>Correct I think I intend to finish the work on time, so I make some mistakes at work.>>Correct I just focus on finishing time, so I don\'t think deeply about the work.>>I just focus on the finishing time, so I don\'t think deeply about the work. It is my defect so I try to change my action, but it is very difficult to fix it.>>Correct! So I try not to make a lot of works at the same time.>>So I try not to do a lot of work at the same time. If I have a time, I do some works in advance.>>If I have time, I do some work in advance. It gives me a spare time to think when I have a work.>>It gives me spare time to think when I have work. After that, I could reduce my mistakes at work. >>Correct!

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