Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
What do you usually run out of?
Why is that?
What do you do about it?
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In my case I usually run out of money before receiving monthly salary.
I use credit card when I have to buy or eat something.
When I use credit card, I don't know how much moneys are in my bank account. Whenever I receive the monthly receipt from credit card company, I can find I spent a lot of money by credit card.
I tried to reduce the credit card using times, but it is very difficult because there is no money in my bank account.
It is a continuation of bad situation.
Nowadays I try to save money and try not to use credit card.
I also made a check card and I try to use it.
In case of check card, If there is no money in my bank account, I can't buy something by check card.
Anyway, I have to save money for my life, I will try not to use much money.
강사 첨삭
Good afternoon, James!
What are you doing at this hour?
I think you are a little busy at work.
But I have to thank you for doing this homework of yours. Honestly, money is one of my answers to this question, too.
You always make me realize a lot of things about myself, my friend. I ought to thank you for that as well.
You are the best!
Thanks for always sharing your ideas with me. I hope that you will never get tired of doing so.
Enjoy your holiday with your loved ones.
Until our next chat!
-Klein-
What do you usually run out of?Why is that?What do you do about it?==> In my case I usually run out of money before receiving monthly salary.>>In my case, I usually run out of money before receiving my monthly salary.
I use credit card when I have to buy or eat something.
>>I use the credit card when I have to buy or eat something.When I use credit card, I don\'t know how much moneys are in my bank account.
>>When I use the credit card, I don\'t know how much money is in my bank account.
Whenever I receive the monthly receipt from credit card company, I can find I spent a lot of money by credit card.>>Whenever I receive the monthly receipt from the credit card company, I find I\'ve spent a lot of money by my credit card.
I tried to reduce the credit card using times, but it is very difficult because there is no money in my bank account.>>I tried to reduce my consumption of the credit card, but it is very difficult, because there is no money in my bank account.
It is a continuation of bad situation.>>It is a continuation of a bad situation.
>>It is a vicious cycle.
Nowadays I try to save money and try not to use credit card.>>Nowadays, I try to save money and not to use the credit card.
I also made a check card and I try to use it.>>I also made a check card, which I try to use.
In case of check card, If there is no money in my bank account, I can\'t buy something by check card.>>In case of the check card, if there is no money in my bank account, I can\'t buy anything with it.
>>In case of the debit card, if there is no money in my bank account, I can\'t buy anything with it.
Anyway, I have to save money for my life, I will try not to use much money.
>>Correct!
OR >> Anyway, I have to save money for my life, so I will try not to use much money.
>> Anyway, I have to save money for my life, so I will try not to spend much money.
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