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2017-05-02 · 첨삭 강사 Klein

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What do you usually run out of? Why is that? What do you do about it? ==> In my case I usually run out of money before receiving monthly salary. I use credit card when I have to buy or eat something. When I use credit card, I don't know how much moneys are in my bank account. Whenever I receive the monthly receipt from credit card company, I can find I spent a lot of money by credit card. I tried to reduce the credit card using times, but it is very difficult because there is no money in my bank account. It is a continuation of bad situation. Nowadays I try to save money and try not to use credit card. I also made a check card and I try to use it. In case of check card, If there is no money in my bank account, I can't buy something by check card. Anyway, I have to save money for my life, I will try not to use much money.

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Good afternoon, James! What are you doing at this hour? I think you are a little busy at work. But I have to thank you for doing this homework of yours. Honestly, money is one of my answers to this question, too. You always make me realize a lot of things about myself, my friend. I ought to thank you for that as well. You are the best! Thanks for always sharing your ideas with me. I hope that you will never get tired of doing so. Enjoy your holiday with your loved ones. Until our next chat! -Klein- What do you usually run out of?Why is that?What do you do about it?==> In my case I usually run out of money before receiving monthly salary.>>In my case, I usually run out of money before receiving my monthly salary. I use credit card when I have to buy or eat something. >>I use the credit card when I have to buy or eat something.When I use credit card, I don\'t know how much moneys are in my bank account. >>When I use the credit card, I don\'t know how much money is in my bank account. Whenever I receive the monthly receipt from credit card company, I can find I spent a lot of money by credit card.>>Whenever I receive the monthly receipt from the credit card company, I find I\'ve spent a lot of money by my credit card. I tried to reduce the credit card using times, but it is very difficult because there is no money in my bank account.>>I tried to reduce my consumption of the credit card, but it is very difficult, because there is no money in my bank account. It is a continuation of bad situation.>>It is a continuation of a bad situation. >>It is a vicious cycle. Nowadays I try to save money and try not to use credit card.>>Nowadays, I try to save money and not to use the credit card. I also made a check card and I try to use it.>>I also made a check card, which I try to use. In case of check card, If there is no money in my bank account, I can\'t buy something by check card.>>In case of the check card, if there is no money in my bank account, I can\'t buy anything with it. >>In case of the debit card, if there is no money in my bank account, I can\'t buy anything with it. Anyway, I have to save money for my life, I will try not to use much money. >>Correct! OR >> Anyway, I have to save money for my life, so I will try not to use much money. >> Anyway, I have to save money for my life, so I will try not to spend much money.

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