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~~ Teacher Mia ~~
I want to advice him live his life for him. When I was young, I did everything for my parents and friends. It\'s because I loved their smile, and thier happiness. I thought if I do something they like, they would smile and happy. But now I know that there were not related with my happiness. So I\'m living my life just for me. Therefore, I hope that newborn child live his life just for him too.
>> I want to advice him to live his life for himself. When I was young, I did everything for my parents and friends. It\'s because I loved their smile and the happiness I can see to them. I thought that if I do something they like, they would smile and be happy. But now I know that they have nothing to with my happiness. So I\'m living my life just for me. Therefore, I hope that the newborn child will live his life just for himself too.
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