homework

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Teacher Sophia

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Two options, building art museums and building recreational facilities, have advantages respectively.

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However, if I have to choose only one option, I will select the latter.

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First of all, recreational facilities can relieve people\'s stress.

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people today are under a lot of stress because competition has increased and there is no refreshment.

>> People nowadays have a lot of stress because they are living in a competitive world where there is no room for relaxation.

If there are recreational facilities, people can reduce their stress while spending time at the facilities, which enhance the productivity of workers.

>> Recreational facilities can reduce the stress of the people and increase their productivity.
Second, recreational facilities can attract tourists and enlarge domestic consumption.

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a recreational facility such as an amusement park is one of the most popular place which tourists frequent.

>> A recreational facility like amusement parks are one of the most famous places which tourist frequently visit.

As a result, many tourist would visit the place and spend money around the facility.

>> As a result, tourists will spend much money to enjoy the place.

It help the domestic consumption escalate and economy to be active.

>> It helps the economy improve.
To sum up, building recreational facilities not only improve the quality of people\'s life by relieving stress, but also help the economy boom.

>> To sum it up, building recreational facilities improves people\'s life and the boost the economy.