HOMEWORK
학생이 쓴 원문
HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:
WRITING SKILL:
ESSAY: Do you trust anyone with your life?
Please answer in complete sentences.
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I usually trust someone that I meet in my life. But I don't believe 100 percent strangers, and someone who get use to lie. I think my style is not bad to live. Sometimes I think that I'm too innocent to live, so need to improve my surviving skill.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!
Enjoy watching Harry Potter!
Thank you for making your assignment.
~~ Teacher Mia ~~
I usually trust someone that I meet in my life. But I don\'t believe 100 percent strangers, and someone who get use to lie. I think my style is not bad to live. Sometimes I think that I\'m too innocent to live, so need to improve my surviving skill.
>> I usually trust someone that I\'ve already met in my life. But I don\'t believe with strangers or someone who gets used in lying. I think my belief is not bad to believe in. I think that I\'m too innocent in living so I need to improve my survival skills.
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