Homework

Hi [이름]! :)

A great afternoon! ^^

I know that learning English can be quite challenging.

But I thank you for your perseverance and I hope that you would continue

having that positive attitude towards learning English.

Practice makes permanent. ^^

See you!

Teacher Glenda

Here are my corrections:

Hi Grenda how is it going? 

>> Correct! but it\'s Glenda :D
 Did you enjoy your holiday well?

>> Correct

or

>> Did you enjoy your holiday?
 i was reading well the advice you for me ..thank you for your advice!!

>> I was reading the advice you gave me... Thank you for your advice!
 this topic is kind of difficult to explain 

>> Correct [This topic is kind of difficult to explain]

 To be honest , appearance is important to live in this world 

>> Correct! [Just don\'t forget the period at the end of your sentence.]
 That`s why we need to get something like that and I think we need to improve our inside as well 

>> That\'s why we need to have a good appearance and we also need to improve our inner side.
 So i mean ,beauty is on the inside

>> So what I mean is beauty is on the inside.