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When do you call your family and friends over the phone?
I call phone to my familiy when my mom is not in home.
>> I call my mom when she is not home yet.
And,I call phone when I demand for my family to buy somethings.
>> And I call my family when I ask them to buy something for me.
Sometime, I call to my freinds,too.
>> Sometimes, I call to my friends, too.
I call phone to my frends when I want to play with my freinds.
>> I call my friends over the phone when I want to play with them.
And I call phone when I ask for my freind to homework.
>> I also call my friend when I ask about homework.
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