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There are many abilities which a leader has to possess, but honesty is the most necessary ability.

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This is because honesty help the leader gain trust internally and externally.

>> This is because honesty helps a leader gain the trust of his subordinates.
First, only honest leaders can obtain trust and support from internal members.

>> Firstly, honest leaders can gain trust and support from his subordinates.

To specific, if members feel that the leader have many confidential things about their group, and do not tell important information, they feel they are just extraneous person and do not contribute.

>> To be specific, if members feel that the leader is hiding a lot of things from the group then the members will feel that they are just extraneous members and couldn\'t contribute anything.

As a result, the members would abandon the group.

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For example, a former president of Korea, Guen-hae, Park, was impeached because of her dishonesty.

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She hid many important information about the sinking of the ship and her friend\'s embezzlement.

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Second, the honesty of a leader triggers trust and support from other group and counterpart.

>> Secondly, the honesty of a leader triggers the trust and support of other groups.

This is because, if the leader act and speak honestly, other people tend to think the group and all members would be honest.

>> This is because, if the leader is honest it means that the members are honest too.

As a result, the image of group will be good, and then the group will thrive.

>> As a result, the group will gain a good reputation and it will thrive.