Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!
Every woman faced that kind of problem during their teenage tears.
I commend you for sharing that.
Thank you for doing your homework.
~~ Teacher Mia ~~
I have few embarrassing childhood memories. One of them is happened at 8 years ago. It was far, I was unused to manage menses. It\'s because, it was only 3rd time to faced menses, so I didn\'t knew that I need to change my hygienic band. Therefore, my blood is leak to my pants. Fortunately I wear long jacket, so it dosen\'t looked and nobody knew that, but I was panic. After that experience I\'m always check my seat.
~~ I had few embarrassing childhood memories. One of them happened 8 years ago. I\'m far away from home and I was unused to manage menses. It\'s because it was only my third time to have menses so I didn\'t know that I need to change my hygienic band. Therefore I had a leakage on my pants. Fortunately I wore a long jacket, so nobody noticed and knew about it but I was panicking that time. After that experience I\'m always checking on my seat.
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