Homework (73)

2020-06-11 · 첨삭 강사 Sheila

학생이 쓴 원문

1. When would you like to go to the [이름] with your family? I want to go to the [이름] with my family on Sunday. 2. When was the last time you went to the [이름]? It was last year. 3. What are the activities that you may enjoy at the [이름]? I can play something that is in the [이름].

강사 첨삭

Hi there [이름]! Thank you for always taking the time to do your homework! 

Until the next one!

See you in class tomorrow!

~Teacher Sheila


I want to go to the [이름] with my family on Sunday.
>>CORRECT

It was last year.
>>CORRECT
OR>>The last time I went to the [이름] was last year.

I can play something that is in the [이름].
>>CORRECT
OR>>I can play what is in the [이름]. 

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