Homework

  Hi [이름]! ^^

A beautiful afternoon! \")

Thank you for being honest. I appreciate that you are sharing

how you are dealing with studying English.

I\'ve gone through the same struggle when I was starting learning the language. :)

I just had to be patient and not give up. :)

You don\'t have any problem in expressing your thoughts or ideas.

We just have to deal more on how you use words and construct your sentences.

Always check on the grammar corrections I give you after our class and study them.

Make sure to work on those mistakes and lessen them s we go on with the class.

You can do it! ^^

See you!

Teacher Glenda

Here are my corrections:

Hi Glenda:D how are you??:) i was so happy to see you agaiin 

>> Correct [I was so happy to see you again.]
I study english everyday ! but english is getting harder and harder haha 

>> Correct

or

>> I am studying English everyday but English is getting harder and harder.
 English is going up and down constanly like roller coaster

>> English is going up and down constantly like a roller coaster.
 Even though english is difficult , i\'m trying to study english :) 

>> Correct [I\'m still trying to study English.]


 There was an accident that i changed my whole life 

>> There was an incident that changed my life whole life.
 I didn\'t do anything in korea after discharge from military service

>> I didn\'t do anything in Korea after I was discharged from the military service.
 What i did in korea is fatory worker who assemble the car 

>> What I did was to become a factory worker who assembles cars.
 And watier who provide the customer service

>> And a waiter who provides customer service.
 One day suddenly my friend told me to go to australia 

>> One day, my friend suddenly told me to go to Australia.
 so i said \"why do you suggest me going to australia? if we go there , we can\'t speak english man!! \"

>> So I said, \"Why would you suggest me to go to Australia? If we go there, we don\'t know how to speak English man!\"
 but he said \" don\'t worry man just see what happens 

>> But he said, \"Don\'t worry man let\'s just see what happens.\"
and then i changed my whole life since i got here :)

>> And that changed my whole life since I got here :)