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2017-05-10 · 첨삭 강사 Shanee

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Hi~ Good to see you. I am [이름] Ji Eun from Korea. I have an English name [이름]. This is given by my tutor in the Phillippines. I was thinking about English neme from bible and she suggested this to me. Some people told me that this neme doesn't fit me but I love my name. This is how I got this good name. Let me talk about myself more. I have just been starting working as a wellfare worker two monthes ago. It is a new work so It is not easy but interesting. I think I am friendly and I like to talk to people so I think this job fits me. I will tell you about myself more when we meet. I am so excietd to meet you. See you soon.

강사 첨삭

Thanks for introducing yourself Miss [이름]!

Your English name is pretty. [이름] means friend in Hebrew.

I think this fits you since you\'re a friendly person.C\")

See you in class.

 

~Teacher Shanee^^,

 

Hi~ Good to see you. I am [이름] Ji Eun from Korea.

>>> Correct!
I have an English name [이름].

>>> OR: My English name is [이름].

This is given by my tutor in the Phillippines.

>>> This was given by my tutor in the Philippines.

I was thinking about English neme from bible and she suggested this to me.

>>> I was thinking of an English name from the Bible and she suggested this to me.

Some people told me that this neme doesn\'t fit me
but I love my name.

>>> Correct! [name]

This is how I got this good name.

>>> Correct!

Let me talk about myself more.

>>> Correct!

I have just been starting working as a wellfare worker two monthes ago.

>>> I have started working as a welfare worker two months ago.

It is a new work so It is not easy but interesting.

>>> It is a new career for me so it is not easy but I find it interesting.

I think I am friendly and I like to talk to people so I think this job fits me.

>>> Correct!
I will tell you about myself more when we meet.

>>> Correct!

I am so excietd to meet you. See you soon.

>>> Correct! [excited]

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