HOMEWORK
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Thanks for introducing yourself Miss [이름]!
Your English name is pretty. [이름] means friend in Hebrew.
I think this fits you since you\'re a friendly person.C\")
See you in class.
~Teacher Shanee^^,
Hi~ Good to see you. I am [이름] Ji Eun from Korea.
>>> Correct!
I have an English name [이름].
>>> OR: My English name is [이름].
This is given by my tutor in the Phillippines.
>>> This was given by my tutor in the Philippines.
I was thinking about English neme from bible and she suggested this to me.
>>> I was thinking of an English name from the Bible and she suggested this to me.
Some people told me that this neme doesn\'t fit me
but I love my name.
>>> Correct! [name]
This is how I got this good name.
>>> Correct!
Let me talk about myself more.
>>> Correct!
I have just been starting working as a wellfare worker two monthes ago.
>>> I have started working as a welfare worker two months ago.
It is a new work so It is not easy but interesting.
>>> It is a new career for me so it is not easy but I find it interesting.
I think I am friendly and I like to talk to people so I think this job fits me.
>>> Correct!
I will tell you about myself more when we meet.
>>> Correct!
I am so excietd to meet you. See you soon.
>>> Correct! [excited]
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