Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:
WRITING SKILL:
ESSAY: If you could time travel, where would you go?
Please answer in complete sentences.
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If I could time travel, I will go to the time that I was 16, and write a letter for my mother to tell the number of Lotto. It she buy a lotto, and write that numbers on it, it would be perfect. My family can be rich!! kk. I really want to try it.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]!
Thank you for making your assignment!
~~ Teacher Mia ~~
If I could time travel, I will go to the time that I was 16, and write a letter for my mother to tell the number of Lotto. It she buy a lotto, and write that numbers on it, it would be perfect. My family can be rich!! kk. I really want to try it.
~~ If I could time travel, I will go back to the time that I was 16 and write a letter for my mother to tell the winning number of Lotto. It she bought a lottery card, and write that numbers on it then it would be perfect. My family must have become rich! I really want to try it.
파워잉글리쉬 영어첨삭교정 서비스에 실제로 접수된 글입니다. 작성자와 글에 등장하는 사람·회사 이름, 연락처 등 개인을 알아볼 수 있는 정보는 모두 지웠습니다. 문법 오류는 학습 자료로서의 가치를 위해 원문 그대로 두었습니다.