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2017-05-10 · 첨삭 강사 Klein

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What are you musing about today? ==> As you know, I had a long holiday in May. My vacation is from last Wednesday to today(Tuesday). I have to go to work tomorrow. I worry about that I forgot how to work. So I am pondering how to work tomorrow. There are many e-mails in my mail box. I have to check and I have to prepare something for a work. The other one is the president of Korea. As you know, it is a president election day today. I am watching the result of the election for the presidential vote. Until now, Mr. [Name] is the firs class. Tomorrow morning, next Korean President will be decided. I hope that new president should take care and keep Korean people. It is what I am musing about today.

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You did it again, James! You have made so many sound sentences below. I only made a few modifications with the others. Those are minimal corrections, my friend. The thing here is I was able to understand you, so I bet others would understand you as well. I only want you to check the corrections, so you would be guided. Thanks for sharing! Now, I am pondering on the result of your presidential election as well. Oh my, I wonder who your next president is. Keep me posted! -Klein- What are you musing about today?==>As you know, I had a long holiday in May.>>Correct My vacation is from last Wednesday to today(Tuesday).>>My vacation is from last Wednesday until today (Tuesday). I have to go to work tomorrow.>>Correct! I worry about that I forgot how to work.>>I worry about forgetting how to work. >>I worry that I might have forgotten how to work. So I am pondering how to work tomorrow.>>So I am pondering on how I would work tomorrow. There are many e-mails in my mail box.>>Correct I have to check and I have to prepare something for a work.>>I have to check them and prepare something of work.The other one is the president of Korea.>>Correct As you know, it is a president election day today.>>As you know, it is the Presidential Election Day. >>As you know, today is the presidential election. I am watching the result of the election for the presidential vote. >>CorrectUntil now, Mr. [Name] is the firs class.>>Until now, Mr.Moon is first in the list. >>Until now, Mr.Moon is leading the race. Tomorrow morning, next Korean President will be decided.>>Tomorrow morning, the next Korean President will be decided. I hope that new president should take care and keep Korean people.>>I hope that the new president would take care of the Korean people.It is what I am musing about today. >>Correct! 

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