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This is such an enlightening composition, Sir!
It is perfect! I am so proud of you!
I think I have already heard about this situation.
Our childhood and our family have a great impact on how our personalities and characteristics are shaped.
On the other hand, knowledge, skills, and attitude must be equally possessed and utilized.
See you tomorrow!
To explain the relations between knowledge and attitude, we need to add awareness and behavior to them.
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Step by step, we get some knowledge, we are aware of something, we possess some attitude, and we show some behavior.
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Just before execution, a death-row prisoner strongly blamed his mother saying that when he was a child, her compliment about his stealing resulted in today\'s punishment.
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Knowledge is acquired from learning, imprinted on someone\'s mind through awareness, matured by attitude, and showed in someone\'s behavior.
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The child began to steal in order to please his poor mother and ended up stealing human life.
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There are two kinds of attitude at a workplace: one is cooperative, the other is uncooperative.
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Why do they show the different attitude or behavior?
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I think it\'s because their awareness about a lot of things is quite different from each other.
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Therefore, we come to know that knowledge is just a small part of forming someone\'s attitude.
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It is safe to say that attitude is more important than knowledge.
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