Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:
WRITING SKILL:
ESSAY: Do you believe in ghosts and demons? Please answer in
complete sentences.
I don't believe them. It's because, I am a coward person who dosen't like them. If I believe them, I can't live anymore, and I can't sleep. I just want to believe myself and people who are living their lives. I really don't want to know about they are real or not.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!
Thank you for making your assignment!
~~ Teacher Mia ~~
I don\'t believe them. It\'s because, I am a coward person who dosen\'t like them. If I believe them, I can\'t live anymore, and I can\'t sleep. I just want to believe myself and people who are living their lives. I really don\'t want to know about they are real or not.
~~ I don\'t believe in them. It\'s because I am a coward person who doesn\'t like them. If I believe in them, I can\'t live anymore and I can\'t sleep. I just want to believe in myself and people who are living their own lives. I really don\'t want to know about if they are real or not.
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