Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]! ^^
Good evening! ^^
It\'s always good to read experiences you share on our essay homework.
I appreciate that you are doing it consistently.
Let\'s keep it up!
Teacher Glenda
Here are my corrections:
Hi Glenda:D how are you doing?
>> I\'m doing great :) thank you :)
I was reading the english tip you gave me
>> Correct (but don\'t forget to put period at the end of your sentence)
I will continue to practice english as much as i can
>> Correct (but don\'t forget to put period at the end of your sentence)
I obviously prefer to get up early in the morning
>> Correct (but don\'t forget to put period at the end of your sentence)
Cuz i feel so happy when i open my eyes in the morning at 7am
>> Because I feel happy when I open my eyes at 7 am in the morning.
Sometimes i feel sleepy but if i listen to music while i take a shower After that i feel better and i think i get up well in the morning.
>> Sometimes I feel sleepy but if I listen to music while I take a shower, I feel better and I will think that I got up well.
Whem i woke up late , i often think it`s waste of time.
>> When I wake up late, I often think it\'s a waste of time.
So i set up alarm between 8 to 9 am on the weekend.
>> So I set up an alarm between 8 to 9 am on weekends.
To be honest , i don`t do anything special in the morning
>> To be honest , I don`t usually do anything special in the morning.
You know what there`s something a little for me
>> You know that there\'s just little time for me.
That`s why i always get up early
>> That`s why I always get up early.
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