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2017-05-12 · 첨삭 강사 Glenda

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Hi Glenda:D how are you doing? I was reading the english tip you gave me I will continue to practice english as much as i can I obviously prefer to get up early in the morning Cuz i feel so happy when i open my eyes in the morning at 7am Sometimes i feel sleepy but if i listen to music while i take a shower After that i feel better and i think i get up well in the morning. Whem i woke up late , i often think it`s waste of time. So i set up alarm between 8 to 9 am on the weekend. To be honest , i don`t do anything special in the morning You know what there`s something a little for me That`s why i always get up early

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]! ^^

Good evening! ^^


It\'s always good to read experiences you share on our essay homework.

I appreciate that you are doing it consistently.

Let\'s keep it up!


Teacher Glenda


Here are my corrections:

Hi Glenda:D how are you doing?

>> I\'m doing great :) thank you :)
 I was reading the english tip you gave me 

>> Correct (but don\'t forget to put period at the end of your sentence)
 I will continue to practice english as much as i can
>>
Correct (but don\'t forget to put period at the end of your sentence)

I obviously prefer to get up early in the morning

>> Correct (but don\'t forget to put period at the end of your sentence)
 Cuz i feel so happy when i open my eyes in the morning at 7am 

>> Because I feel happy when I open my eyes at 7 am in the morning.
 Sometimes i feel sleepy but if i listen to music while i take a shower After that i feel better and i think i get up well in the morning.

>> Sometimes I feel sleepy but if I listen to music while I take a shower, I feel better and I will think that I got up well.
 Whem i woke up late , i often think it`s waste of time. 

>> When I wake up late, I often think it\'s a waste of time.
 So i set up alarm between 8 to 9 am on the weekend. 

>> So I set up an alarm between 8 to 9 am on weekends.
 To be honest , i don`t do anything special in the morning 

>> To be honest , I don`t usually do anything special in the morning.
 You know what there`s something a little for me 

>> You know that there\'s just little time for me.
 That`s why i always get up early

>> That`s why I always get up early.

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