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2017-05-12 · 첨삭 강사 Klein

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Have you been roped into something by your friends? ==> I bought many over-the-counter stocks because my friend strongly recommended that company. He said to me that it will make me rich man. I trusted him so I didn't analyze that company and bought the company's stock. The company developed the software for 3D design. Unfortunately the company bankrupted 3years later after I bought their stocks. Because of that I got much money loss. It was a bad memory and I had been roped into something by my friends.

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How are you, James? Thank you for doing your homework once more.  You made so many correct sentences again. I only rephrased a few minimally. Please find time to review them, my friend. No worries, there\'s no time limit. Thanks for sharing! May you continue to have a great time. -Klein- Have you been roped into something by your friends?==>I bought many over-the-counter stocks because my friend strongly recommended that company.>>Correct He said to me that it will make me rich man. >>He said to me that it will make me rich. >>He told me that it will turn me into a rich man.I trusted him so I didn\'t analyze that company and bought the company\'s stock.>>Correct! The company developed the software for 3D design.>>Correct Unfortunately the company bankrupted 3years later after I bought their stocks.>>Unfortunately, the company went bankrupt 3 years later after I bought their stocks. Because of that I got much money loss.>>Because of that, I lost much money. It was a bad memory and I had been roped into something by my friends. >>Correct

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