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2017-05-12 · 첨삭 강사 Klein

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How do you feel about people who always spill the beans? ==> I don't like that kind of person who always spill the beans. If I have a secret, it means he doesn't want another people to know about it. Nevertheless, it will be very unpleasant if another people know about the secret. If I know who spilled the beans, I hate him and I will try to do revenge. After I knew the person who said my secret, I will give a warning to him and I will not talk with him about everything. I think the trust among people is very important thing. So the secrets of others should be kept.

강사 첨삭

Aha! Trust me; I will not spill the beans. You are right about \"TRUST\". It is so fragile, my friend. If I were to disclose my secrets to you, in case I have one, what would you do? Treat it as a rhetorical question. Have another great time with your family, James. Please extend my regards to them. -Klein- How do you feel about people who always spill the beans?==> I don\'t like that kind of person who always spill the beans.>>I don\'t like that kind of person who always spills the beans. If I have a secret, it means he doesn\'t want another people to know about it. >>If I have a secret, it means I don\'t want other people to know about it.Nevertheless, it will be very unpleasant if another people know about the secret.>>Nevertheless, it will be very unpleasant if other people know about the secret. If I know who spilled the beans, I hate him and I will try to do revenge.>>If I knew who spilled the beans, I would hate him and I will try to avenge for it. After I knew the person who said my secret, I will give a warning to him and I will not talk with him about everything.>>CorrectI think the trust among people is very important thing. >>I think trust among people is a very important thing.So the secrets of others should be kept. >>Correct 

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