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2017-05-15 · 첨삭 강사 Travis

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Of course I have heard about white lies and you would tell someone white lies for various reasons. Most of the people try to tell white lies as greeting in Korea just in case you meet people for the first time and have a meeting for business. For example, “It was nice meeting you. I’d like to you to have lunch someday” means just greeting for having a effective relationship. It is also same situation like “you can make a boyfriend after graduating highschool” These are positive things to make a relationship between people and it sometimes leads on good effects with work. But It is not good to use continuous white lies every time you face problems. I think that Honest will be key to solve problems and it can build up a belief between people. Once the belief break up among people, it is hard to recover it again. Therefore you should consider to tell a wight lie depending on situations.

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Hello [이름]!


It\'s me! It\'s good to be back, I\'m really sorry that I was gone for too long. I hope you understand me. Anyway, I\'m also glad that you went back to my class but unfortunately our last class was not really enough, we didn\'t have enough time. See you later :)


Teacher Travis.


Of course I have heard about white lies and you would tell someone white lies for various reasons.

>>Of course I\'ve heard about white lies and you will tell white lies to someone for various reasons.
 Most of the people try to tell white lies as greeting in Korea just in case you meet people for the first time and have a meeting for business.
>>Most people are using white lies as a first impression in Korea just in case you will meet people for the first time and have a meeting for a business. 
For example, “It was nice meeting you. I’d like to you to have lunch someday” means just greeting for having a effective relationship.
>>For example, \"It is nice to meet you. I\'d like to have a lunch with you someday\" 
means just greeting for having a effective relationship.
 It is also same situation like “you can make a boyfriend after graduating highschool”
>>Another example is \"you can have a boyfriend after graduating high school\".
These are positive things to make a relationship between people and it sometimes leads on good effects with work.
>>Correct.
But It is not good to use continuous white lies every time you face problems.
>>Correct.

>>OR: But it is not good to continues using white lies every time you face a problem.
 I think that Honest will be key to solve problems and it can build up a belief between people.
>>I think that honesty will be the key to solve a problems and it can build up a belief between people.
Once the belief break up among people, it is hard to recover it again. 
>>Correct.

>>One the belief breaks among people, it is hard to regain it again.
 Therefore you should consider to tell a wight lie depending on situations.

>>Correct.

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