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2017-05-15 · 첨삭 강사 Glenda

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Hi teacher~ how are you? Now i read the feedback you gave me and to be honest i didn`t study english on the friday and saturday... I`m supposed to study english on friday , all of sudden i have been called from work. one chef asked me to work now so i wasn`t able to study english Here are the homework 1.I promise i`ll call you as soon as i have any news. 2.This time tomorrow Tom is gonna fly over the Atlantic on his way to Boston. 3.Those bags look heavy. i`ll carry one of them for you 4.They are getting married on saturday. All the guests are gonna wear white 5.The following week they are gonna enjoy the sun in the West Indies. 6.The sky is a bit cloudy. will it rain do you think? 7. If you look at this map you`ll see where the islands are. 8.You should have no problem finding him he`ll carry a guitar

강사 첨삭




  Hi [이름]! ^^

 A manic Monday!


Here we go again with another week of learning English.

No worries about not being able to study. I know how demanding your work is. :)

You can always practice by speaking and being conscious with your grammar while

speaking with your colleagues. ;)


See yah!


Teacher Glenda


Here are my corrections:

Hi teacher~ how are you?
Now i read the feedback you gave me and to be honest i didn`t study english on the friday and saturday...

>> Now I\'m reading the feedback you gave me and to be honest I didn\'t study English on Friday and Saturday.
 I`m supposed to study english on friday , all of sudden i have been called from work. one chef asked me to work now so i wasn`t able to study english
>> I suppose to study English on Friday but all of a sudden I had been called to work. One chef asked me to work so I wasn\'t able to study English. 

or

>>>  I suppose to study English on Friday but all of a sudden by one of the chef to work so I wasn\'t able to study English.
 Here are the homework
>> Here are my answers:


I promise i`ll call you as soon as i have any news.
>> Correct [I\" will always be in capital letter :)]


 2.This time tomorrow Tom is gonna fly over the Atlantic on his
way to Boston.
>> will be flying [Tom will be flying over Atlantic on his way to Boston.]


 3.Those bags look heavy. i`ll carry one of them for you
>> Correct [I will carry one of them.]


 4.They are getting married on saturday. All the guests are gonna wear white
>> will be wearing [All the guests will be wearing white.]


 5.The following week they are gonna enjoy the sun in the West
Indies.
>> will be enjoying [The following week they will be enjoying the sun in the West Indies.]


 6.The sky is a bit cloudy. will it rain do you think?
>> Correct [Will it be rain do you think?


 7. If you look at this map you`ll see where the islands are.
>> Correct [If you look at this map, you will see where the islands are.


 8.You should have no problem finding him he`ll carry a guitar

>> will be carrying [He will be carrying a guitar.]

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