homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Something I wouldn't give up is a book. I never get tired of reading them. They're full of incredible ideas and information. I learn something new each time I read it. For science books, it's like I learn how the world works without actually experiencing it. One reason why I like fantasy books is because I can go to the fantastic world there. Reading books can help with solving stress. I forget all the problems and time when I go to than other world. These were the reasons why I can't give up my books.
강사 첨삭
Hi there [이름]!
Thanks for writing this.
You are like my son. He also treasures his books to the point he doesn\'t want other people touching them.
Haha! Anyway, let\'s talk again on Wednesday! Take care!
~Teacher Shanee^^,
Something I wouldn\'t give up is a book.
>>> The things I wouldn\'t give yup are my books.
I never get tired of reading them.
>>> Correct!
They\'re full of incredible ideas and information.
>>> Correct!
I learn something new each time I read it.
>>> I learn something new each time I read them.
For science books, it\'s like I learn how the world works without actually experiencing it.
>>> Correct!
One reason why I like fantasy books is because I can go to the fantastic world there.
>>> One reason why I like fantasy books is because it can bring me to the fantasy world.
Reading books can help with solving stress.
>>> Reading books can help in solving stress.
>>> OR: Reading books can help in relieving stress.
I forget all the problems and time when I go to than other world.
>>> I forget all my problems and I don\'t notice the time when I read those books.
These were the reasons why I can\'t give up my books.
>>> These are the reasons why I can\'t give up my books.
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