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I am sure that the older generation survived without using a mobile phone.
However, I cannot imagine living without it!
The convenience it gives is truly undeniable^^
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Have a great day~
By and large, I don\'t agree that increasing communication usage of computers and mobile phones by young people has had a negative effect on their reading and writing skills.
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Especially, writing by using mobile phones tend to be needed quick response with simple sentences.
>> Especially, writing by using mobile phones needs quick response with simple sentences.
It\'s because writing by using mobile phones is not a real writing, but a kind of talking.
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Conversations have to be speedy, otherwise they would easily be boring friends.
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Having said that, I think young people\'s writing ability will be improved through speedy texting.
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Writing using pens for the old generation is more comfortable rather than computers or mobile phones.
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However, when young people want to write a letter or an essay using computers or mobile phones, there seems to be no difference compared to using pens.
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On the contrary, using computers or mobile phones is more convenient and useful because we can easily correct, save, and edit anything.
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What\'s more, today\'s report is not two-dimensional, but three dimensional, colorful, movable and audible.
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What to use in writing or reading is not important, but how to create beneficial and valuable idea and thought.
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