Homework!

2017-05-19 · 첨삭 강사 Jeny

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First, the problem of unemployment issue is job seekers eye level. Eyes lower just a tad towards small businesses in preparation for entering the work force, will not be difficult to solve the unemployment problem. But, I think the cause of the problem parents expectations. They are happier with children’s Big company or a job in public institutions. The reason is that the company wants to become a stable government employee because the future is unstable. I think the big business is a matter of government and business, and it is a matter of unstable reality. I think the unemployment problem will be partly solved if the government and businesses take the initiative in ensuring the future of job seekers.

강사 첨삭


Hello  Jay,

Very good!!!! You made a good job on your homework. Please don\'t forget to memorize or remember the words so that you can use it on your daily conversation. I encourage you to read and meet new words so that it can improve your vocabulary skills.

T. Jeny

 

First, the problem of unemployment issue is job seekers eye level.

>>First, the problem of unemployment issue depends on the job seeker\'s point of view.
 Eyes lower just a tad towards small businesses in preparation for entering the work force, will not be difficult to solve the unemployment problem.
>>They tad towards
small businesses in preparation for entering the work force thus it will not be difficult to solve the unemployment problem.
But, I think the cause of the problem parents expectations.

>>But, I think the cause of the problem is because of their parent\'s expectations.
 They are happier with children’s Big company or a job in public institutions.
>>
 They are happier when their children is working in a big company or having a job in a public institution.
The reason is that the company wants to become a stable government employee because the future is unstable.

>>Because working in the government is stable job thus having a stable future as well.
 I think the big business is a matter of government and business, and it is a matter of unstable reality.
>>
I think it\'s a matter of the government and business that\'s why we have an unstable reality.
I think the unemployment problem will be partly solved if the government and businesses take the initiative in ensuring the future of job seekers.

>>I think the unemployment problem will be partly solved if the government and the businesses take the initiative in ensuring the future of the job seekers.

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