Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!
TGIF! ^^
It\'s finally the end of the week.
It\'s everyone\'s favorite day and we\'re all
looking forward to having a good rest this weekend.
Just hang on.... One more class to practice :)
Good job on this practice! What you have written is already an essay.
Don\'t doubt yourself because you are doing good. Trust me :)
Just bring out your ideas and opinions. Feel free to that because in doing so,
you are training yourself to think and express your thoughts in English without
hesitation. \")
See you!
Teacher Glenda
Here are my corrections:
Hi Glenda:D how are you ??
I always read the English tips you write for me haha
>> Correct :)
I spoke the saying \"Fake it till you make it\" to my coffee school`s teacher.
>> I used the saying \"Fake it till you make it\" to my coffee class teacher.
We were talking about how to study english effectively and how to make the latte art well.
>> Correct
so i said the saying then teacher was like \"oh [이름] your english is getting better !
>> So I said the saying then my teacher was like \"oh [이름] your english is getting better !
I have no idea what is difference true and temporary happiness.
>> I have no idea what is the difference of true and temporary happiness.
In my opinion , untrue life equals temporary happiness
>> In my opinion, untrue life equals to temporary happiness.
If full of happiness , it`s not for temporary happiness but for a constancy
>> If life is full of happiness, it`s not for temporary but for a constancy.
It`s difficult to write these essay actually i don`t know how to write essay
>> It\'s difficult to write this essay actually, I don\'t know how to write essay.
I just can`t come up with any ideas
>> Correct (just don\'t forget the period on the end of your sentences)
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