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Whew! Listening to my grandmother\'s stories when the Japanese conquered the Philippines, I can\'t imagine how they lived in the 1940s.
My heart also shatters for the Syrian people who are caught in the terror of war.
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I don\'t believe that life is becoming more dangerous.
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If it is true to say that life is becoming more dangerous, how can we explain that average life span is getting longer?
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I think a lot of more dangerous things are appearing now in the world than in the past.
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Therefore, we are exposed to new dangers that we might be harmed.
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>>Therefore, we are exposed to new dangers that might harm us.
Our life has been threatened by numerous factors: car accidents, polluted air and water, harmful food and drink, many incurable diseases, wars and terrors, weapons of mass destruction, homicide and violence, natural catastrophe, and the like.
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However, as human beings are more civilized and science and technology are much improved, many problems and dangers are beingovercome and declined.
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According to some scholars, our current world is the safest time in all of human history.
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For example, the number of interstate wars has plummeted since 1945, and the most destructive kind of wars, in which great powers or developed countries fight each other, has vanished altogether.
>> For example, the number of interstate wars has plummeted since 1945, and the most destructive kind of wars, in which great powers or developed countries fight each other, have vanished altogether.
That is why I don\'t believe that life is becoming more dangerous.
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