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2017-05-22 · 첨삭 강사 Glenda

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Hi how are you ?? I know how hard to understand a conversation that i`m not part The thing i found interesting is that i can hear well what other people are saying to me , but it`s difficult for me to hear what other people are saying. Even though it`s difficult , i`m trying to listen what other people are saying If there is gift that i can give to a friend , i`ll buy what friend want Imagine your friend about to enter a unibersity and friend don`t like a pen but you bought to give the expensive pen for friend Your friend received and will think about it like this umm..i don`t think he`s usually really into me So the point is , you should usually take more interest what friend need

강사 첨삭

  Hi [이름] ! ^^

Welcome back to a happy Monday! ^^


I know how had it is to start your daily activities

every Monday. But I thank you for every effort you are giving in

doing simple exercises like this. ^^

Most of your sentences are almost correct. We just have to be conscious

about the small part of the sentence such as prepositions (in, on, at, from etc,) and

articles (a, an, the). But good job! Way to go! ^^



See you in class :)


Teacher Glenda


Here are my corrections:

Hi how are you ??
I know how hard to understand a conversation that i`m not part 

>> I know how hard it is to understand a conversation that I\'m not a part of.
 The thing i found interesting is that i can hear well what other people are saying to me , but it`s difficult for me to hear what other people are saying.

>> One thing I found interesting is, I can hear what other people are saying to pretty well. However, it\'s difficult for me to hear what other people are saying.
 Even though it`s difficult , i`m trying to listen what other people are saying 
>> Even though it\'s difficult, I\'m trying to listen to what other people are saying.  

If there is gift that i can give to a friend , i`ll buy what friend want 

>>  If there is gift that i can give to a friend, I`ll buy what that friend wants. 
Imagine your friend about to enter a unibersity and friend don`t like a pen but you bought to give the expensive pen for friend

>> Imagine your friend who is about to enter university and that friend doesn\'t`t like a pen but you bought an expensive pen as a gift.
 Your friend received and will think about it like this umm..i don`t think he`s usually really into me 

>> When your friend receives it, he will think like umm..\"I don`t think he`s really into me\"
So the point is , you should usually take more interest what friend need

>> So the point is, you should always take more interest to what  your friend needs.

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