HOMEWORK
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름]! :)
Thanks for doing your homework today.
Have a good night! :)
Happily,
Teacher JACEY ^_^)
Hello , teacher !
>> Hello, teacher!
Today I have a homework!
>> Today, I Have homework.
Teacher give to me a homework about my dream!
>> My teacher gave me a homework about my dream.
My dream is diplomat.
>> My dream is to be a diplomat.
>> OR : I want to become a diplomat someday.
So I study English and history and Korean.
>> So, I study English, History and Korean.
Diplomat have to do well at language!
>> Diplomats have to do well in language.
So in school I learn chinese and English.
>> So in school, I try to learn Chinese and English.
and I want to go language high school too!
>> I also want to go to an International School.
I do harder and harder and I will become a diplomat.
>> I will study harder until I will become a diplomat.
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