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2017-05-22 · 첨삭 강사 Jacey

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Hello , teacher ! Today I have a homework! Teacher give to me a homework about my dream! My dream is diplomat. So I study English and history and Korean. Diplomat have to do well at language! So in school I learn chinese and English. and I want to go language high school too! I do harder and harder and I will become a diplomat.

강사 첨삭

Hi, [이름]! :)

Thanks for doing your homework today.

Have a good night! :)


Happily,

Teacher JACEY ^_^)


Hello , teacher !

>> Hello, teacher!


Today I have a homework!

>> Today, I Have homework.


Teacher give to me a homework about my dream!
>> My teacher gave me a homework about my dream.


My dream is diplomat.

>> My dream is to be a diplomat.

>> OR : I want to become a diplomat someday.


So I study English and history and Korean.

>> So, I study English, History and Korean.


Diplomat have to do well at language!

>> Diplomats have to do well in language.


So in school I learn chinese and English.

>> So in school, I try to learn Chinese and English.


and I want to go language high school too!
>> I also want to go to an International School.


 I do harder and harder and I will become a diplomat.

>> I will study harder until I will become a diplomat.

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