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2017-05-24 · 첨삭 강사 Marie

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How would you help a pessimist change? What advice would you give them? Hello, Marie It's Tuesday. I'm afraid, I changed my book Because It was harder than i thought and I think I'd like to learn everyday conversation If you are possible, Can i learn the new book? Maybe, I just think I'll have a opic test in July Could you help me, Right? Thank you. [이름] See you on Wednesday, Marie.

강사 첨삭

Hi there, Jack!

Thanks for dropping by and sending me a message.

I was wondering why you suddenly changed your book.

Anyway, let\'s try to study it later and see if it suits your level.

Have a good day.

Ciao!

~Teacher Marie~ ^^

Hello, Marie.

>> CORRECT!
 It\'s Tuesday.
>> CORRECT! 
I\'m afraid, I changed my book

>> I\'m afraid I changed my book.
 Because It was harder than i thought and

>> Because it was harder than I thought.
 I think I\'d like to learn everyday conversation

>> I\'d like to learn about everyday conversation.
 If you are possible, Can i learn the new book?

>> If it\'s possible, can I study the new book?
 Maybe, I just think I\'ll have a opic test in July

>> I\'m going to take an OPIC test in July.
 Could you help me, Right?
>> You could help me, right?

OR:
>> Could you help me?

 Thank you.

>> CORRECT! 
 Have a good day.

>> CORRECT! 
 See you on Wednesday, Marie.

>> CORRECT!

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