Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
What are the things that you can do right off the bat of a gathering?
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Unfortunately, I didn't understand the meaning of today's homework.
So I was very confused and I didn't know what I do.
After talking with you, I fully understand the meaning of that sentence.
As you know,I am introvert so I don't like something to do in a gathering.
But If I must have to something in a meeting, I will do dancing.
I didn't learn a dance so I call it "mack chum". There are no rules and no sequences because I never learned about dance.
I just move my body freely, and shake my body sometimes.
Although it looks ridiculous, but it is my best.
That kind of reason makes me more and more introvert.
강사 첨삭
There you have it! I am glad that you are willing to ask questions. You are one pro here now, James!
Thank you for making me feel proud of you more and more each day.
How I wish I could see you dance in one of these days!
Thanks for sharing, my friend.
Do it right off the bat!
-Klein-
What are the things that you can do right off the bat of a gathering?==>Unfortunately, I didn\'t understand the meaning of today\'s homework.
>>CorrectSo I was very confused and I didn\'t know what I do.
>>CorrectAfter talking with you, I fully understand the meaning of that sentence.>>After talking with you, I fully understood the meaning of that sentence.As you know,I am introvert so I don\'t like something to do in a gathering.
>>As you know, I am introvert so I don\'t like doing something in a gathering.But If I must have to something in a meeting, I will do dancing.>>But if I must, I will dance.
>>But if I have to do something in a meeting, I will dance.
I didn\'t learn a dance so I call it \"mack chum\".
>>Correct
There are no rules and no sequences because I never learned about dance.>>Corrrect
I just move my body freely, and shake my body sometimes.>>Correct
Although it looks ridiculous, but it is my best.>>Although it looks ridiculous, it is my best.
>> It looks ridiculous, but it is my best.
That kind of reason makes me more and more introvert.
>>Correct
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